Birks Work Clip.. Critism Welcomed

Discussion in 'Jazz / Commercial' started by trjeam, Dec 26, 2005.

  1. trjeam

    trjeam Pianissimo User

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    I just posted two clips from a couple of months ago of me playing Birk's Work.

    I'm looking for constructive critism. Tell me what you dug and what you didn't dig and wich one you liked better.

    I also have a clip from christmas gig (although not a christmas song) if you want to check that out..

    the songs can be found here:

    http://www.soundclick.com/jorgeayala
     
  2. W Scott

    W Scott Piano User

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    Birks Works 2, generally a really good sound. You are a bit off in your timing on the track---understandable as I've found some tracks hard to match time with. Also, what happened with the higher notes? You wound up with a bad case of the fuzzies and fading out. Thanks for posting the clips, you really do learn by recording yourself!
     
  3. trjeam

    trjeam Pianissimo User

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    thanks for the reply. I don't know what happened with me and the timing.. i guess i lost the groove or something.. but i heard that when i listened to it.

    and the fuzziness fading out i can explain.. I once heard maynard do something really cool with his chops were the note sounded dirty... well i was trying to get it to sound dirty and while going for the note my chops freaked out and i got fuzzy and faded out...

    i could of done a growl i guess but i was experimenting with something different.
     

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