I listened and I agree with Bob. When I hear it done properly, it brings tears to my eyes. I could hardly wait for your friend to finish. Technically fine. Artistically, schmaltzy . Maybe I'm a key snob but I always think is sounds best in concert Ab (don't forget that Eb in the middle ). Heard it "sung" at a game this summer, wish I had taped it but I would have needed another gig of memory it was sooooo long ( it would a made the list).