Letter from the reviewer to the author:
"Dear Sir, I am sitting in the smallest room of my house and I have your manuscript in front of me. Soon it shall be behind me."
Kinda cute but I'm wondering what a "laundry store" is... where they sell laundrys? I also suggest that you want to check your spelling... the rat was "living", not "liveing" in the small hole.
You gave away the ending... the cat was the CIA agent.
A token mark is granted to a token effort.
To tell the truth, since we have no idea of your age, grade level, nor teacher's expectations it is difficult if not impossible to adequately evaluate your work.