| i think you have a really good solid start. here are just a few things I noticed (I'm not a pro or anything so don't take me too serious...):
-make sure you know the direction of the notes, the phrase and just what's going on in the music. when you start paying attention to those details it'll make the music that much more interesting. if you listen to how the pros do it (clarke, vizzuti, doc ext..) that should help you a lot..
-also the intonation on some of the higher notes was a little iffy... I'll let the experts give you advice on how to fix that.
but overall i think you have a really good start.
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ps. I forgot to give you credit for having the courage to post this up for thousands of people to critique, I see that as a testament to you wanting to improve. |